2021年考研英语二写作解析(太原新东方)

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摘要:  2021考研初试12月26~27日进行,2021考研初试情况(点击查看》》2021考研初试真题及答案解析专题),第一时间为考生提供考研真题答案及答案解析内容,同时考研考研教师将为考生提供...

2021考研初试12月26~27日进行,2021考研初试情况(点击查看》》2021考研初试真题及答案解析专题),第一时间为考生提供考研真题答案及答案解析内容,同时考研考研教师将为考生提供视频直播解析。直播入口|考研真题答案专区

小作文

Suppose you are,organizing an online meeting,writing an email to,jack,aninternational student to

1) invite himto participateand,

2) tell him about the details.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your name at the end of letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address.

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

To avoid the spread of novel coronavirus, I, on behalf of the Students’Union, would like to extend our most sincere invitation to


you for the onlinemeeting held in the Students’ Hall on December 26th, which mainly focuses oncultural integration.

Specifically, the opening ceremony will begin at 8:00 o’clock, during whichthe president will brief some celebrities who devote themselves to culturalpromotion.Afterwards, the lecture of Professor Smith from Peking University isthe climax of the meeting. Finally, as the student’s representative, you arelater expected to give a speech on Chineseexchange between China and westerncountries at about 11 o’clock.

I really hope you could make it. If it is possible, please inform us ofyour arrival date in advance, so that we can make necessary arrangements.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【参考译文】:

亲爱的杰克,

为避免新型冠状病毒的传播,我谨代表学生会向您发出最诚挚的邀请,邀请您参加12月26日在学生大厅举行的以文化融合为主题的网络会议。

具体来说,开幕式将于8点开始,届时总统将介绍一些致力于文化推广的名人。随后,北京大学史密斯教授的讲座是会议的高潮。最后,作为学生代表,你将在11点左右做一个关于中国与西方国家之间的中国交流的演讲。

我真的希望你能来。


如果可能的话,请提前告知我们您的到达日期,以便我们做出必要的安排。

你最真诚的,

李明

【真题解析】:

本次小作文考察的体裁是很常规的邀请信,大家只需将上课学过的模版进行灵活运用就没问题可以应对。

首段:发出邀请+时间/地点/会议主题

二段:具体介绍活动流程,开幕式+名人演讲+嘉宾任务

三段:期待回信

大作文

Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, youshould

1)interpret the chart, and

2)give yourcomments.

You should write about I50 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET

【范文】

The bar chart given above illustrates the percentage distribution ofresidents’ different ways of physical exercise in a certain city. Among all thefour categories, exercising alone takes the lead, with 54.3%. Then, exercisingwith friends comes as the runner-up, which occupies 47,7%. It is followedbyexercising with families, and it accounts for 23.9%. Exercising in groupsranks the last, taking up only 15.8%.

The phenomenon might be caused by the following reasons. To begin with,with the high-speed development of modern society,


competition andchallengespermeate all walks of life, imposing high pressure on everyone.In order torelieve the heavy stress from daily work and study, an increasing number ofpeople choose to take some exercise during their spare time. Meanwhile due tothe burdensome workload and overwhelming social requirements, it is more widelyaccepted that people usually exercise alone or with some close friends.Furthermore, people have strong awareness of health nowadays, and they paycloser attention to both physical fitness and mental health, so most of themchoose to do some workout, sometimes taking families and friends together.

On the basis of the factors mentioned above, we may draw the conclusionthat the phenomenon is quite normal and acceptable. Therefore, it can bepredicted that the phenomenon will not vanish in the short run.

【参考译文】

以上所给的柱状图展示了某城市居民不同体育锻炼方式的百分比分布。在这四个类别中,仅锻炼一项就占据了首位,占54.3%。其次是和朋友一起锻炼,占了47,7%。其次是与家人一起锻炼,占23.9%。集体锻炼排在最后,仅占15.8%。

这种现象可能是由以下原因引起的。首先,随着现代社会的高速发展,竞争和挑战渗透到各行各业,给每个人带来了很大的压力。为了缓解日常工作和学习带来的沉重压力,越来越多的人选择在业余时间进行体育锻炼。与此同时,由于繁重的工作负担和庞大的社交需求,人们通常单独或与一些亲密的朋友一起锻炼,这一做法得到了更广泛的接受。此外,今天的人们有很强的健康意识,他们更加关注身体健康和心理健康,所以大多数人选择做一些锻炼,有时带家人和朋友一起。

基于以上因素,我们可以得出这样的结论:这种现象是很正常的,可以接受的。因此,可以预测,这种现象在短期内不会消失。

【真题解析】:

本次英二大作文考的是关于锻炼方式,首先一定注意主题词的正确书写,exercise。总体难度中等。

首段,图片的形式虽然是柱状图,但是由于图片反映的是各种锻炼形式的分别占比情况,因此,我们需要按照饼状图的模版来写。注意套模版的时候,由于主题词是动词,因此一定要写成exercising 的形式。

二段:分析原因。可以从「压力」「经济」「意识」等角度来分析锻炼方式的变化,主要就是注意最好不要单纯分析为什么要去做锻炼,而是要带上具体锻炼方式的变化,即为什么有的人是独自锻炼,有的人是和朋友家人。这样会更加扣题。

三段:正常结尾即可,总结+预测趋势。


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